Poetry: Impeccable Arrow

Bursting reveries
wish for your impulsivity
and no promises destitute,
birthing projects missing ends
Exacting words, the only potion
One simple, harmonic motion:
an impeccable arrow in time
aimed and stamped: “future you”,
a message from the past
saying, “I’ll be there”

(Heavily inspired by Danielle LaPorte’s wonderful article on sticking to your word: “The Secret to Success“. A must read!)

A small update…

It’s Friday and the week is over! For me, the days zoomed by and now a little R&R awaits. My family has planned a two-day camping trip at a beautiful lake, and the weatherman says it’s going to be beautiful out there. As there won’t be any posts at Deliciae this weekend, I wanted to leave you with the short, ingenious article linked above.

It’s all about doing what you say you’re going to do, a message my idealistic self should have tattooed on my forehead! I hope you also enjoy my tiny, quickly written poem inspired by said article. (Thanks to Adam Had’em whose poetry inspired me to start posting my own.)

Have a fantastic weekend!

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13 responses to “Poetry: Impeccable Arrow

  1. love that simple and harmonic motion… :)

  2. That’s so great! Good stuff!!! :)

  3. Hello B – I’m so glad you went for it!

    I’m guessing it’s about self development and growing personally, making dreams realities, without losing sight of your experiences and where you came from.

    Love the theme of this and its carefully sculpted lyrics which read so cleverly. There is much craft in your writing.

    Keep ‘em coming!

    Respect and Peace!
    @dam.

    • That’s pretty dead on, @dem. Thanks so much for the kind words! I hope I get more and more inspiration to write, this one was a nice warm up. :)

      Thanks for the motivation! It’s very appreciated!
      Brittany

  4. Have a great weekend, sounds like a great place to go :)

    • Thanks, Kim. I had a fantastic time, and the weather was surprisingly perfect. Haven’t been out in ‘nature’ for a while so it was an awesome break. :)

  5. To Brittany

    Hey Brittany, have a great weekend, and today I am going to talk about another adventure of going to the comic book. I haven’t updated it, yet. But I will do this later tonight. But I did updated my support of Amanda Knox, anyway. So enjoy the weekend and talk to you soon Brittany!!!

    From TMJ

  6. To Brittany

    Oh your welcome Brittany, but I got some great news, even I am going to talk about it tomorrow. My old blog is now back in the works. I started a blog since September 2007, and this was very long, but after 7month, it wasn’t working. Finally I got it to work, and now I got 2 blogs once again, so in case you want to go back to my other blog. Here is the offical link of that blog, and happy enjoy reading it and talk to you soon Brittany!!!
    http://scifi75.blog.com/

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